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Drawn in Tegaki J.

This took me way longer than necessary, but I'm very happy with the overall result. YES, I'M STILL DOING FANART. I can't get rid of this disgusting fangirlism I have inside me.

Oh, and I'm going to actually request critques for the first time. I know there are some mistakes in here that I was too blind to see and I want to hear what you guys would say about it. 8D Thanks!

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Characters (c) Nintendo
Art (c) *BechnoKid

Critiques


:iconpettyartist:
First of all, I have to say that your tegaki works still amaze me. I mean, that's how I found you in the first place.

Next I would like to say that your designs for the gijinka versions of these characters are by far my favorites that I have seen online.

That being said, for the critique:

The only thing I can think of that jumps out at me when I look at this is that I wish the fur/ruff parts of DeeDeeDee's coat were outlined. Maybe not with black, but some sort of outlining.
I say this because the edges disappear towards the top-left of the neckline (that's our left, his right). I don't think there was quite enough contrast there and it looks a bit flat.

But then again, who's to say that outlining wouldn't do the same? :shrug:

Anyways, again, great technique and good creativity with the designs, the layout/composition and the cleanliness of the lines using the given space and program. :thumbsup:
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:iconpirpintine:
how are your tegakis so damn clean and awesome?! its madness.

its awesome, babes <3 i can pick no faults in your art ever 8| it sickens me! *shakes fist*

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... and that's why I'm not allowed to wear hats anymore.
:iconvegeta-holic:
The title had me LOLing, because I read it in DeDeDe's voice.
:icondurrhurrplz:

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I know your type: Tall, dark, and dead.
:iconanna-aurion:
XD You're still so awesome at Tegaki. X3

Kirby's too adorable.X3

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BleckxTippi=:love:
:iconkaaziel:
Nice job! I still LOVE the designs you have for these two. 'specially Dedede. He's hawt. :laughing:

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We should have been home by now
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:iconchocolatebananapop:
I love it! You make Tegaki look so easy. XD

I'd love to critique this, and I'm honing my OCD senses, but I CAN'T FIND ANYTHING WRONG. Sorry... XDD

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CBP (sē' bē' pē ),v.: To make artwork that makes you swear you're on drugs.
:iconverothewolf:
I wish they got rainbow colors at tegaki e :<
Awsome and clean lines!
:iconloppi:
fgdsfgas Awww I love how you draw them, usually when people insist on drawing human forms of everything it irritates me but this is just lovable <3. I'D CRIT but there is very little wrong and I am too tired to think :C

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:iconloppi:
fgdsfgas Awww I love how you draw them, usually when people insist on drawing human forms of everything it irritates me but this is just lovable <3. I'D CRIT but there is very little wrong and I am too tired to think :C

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"You there! Is that your giant under-floor rotating Return of the Jedi badge? Well stop it! Did you know that rotating images from space trilogies can cause sudden outbreaks of Puff the Magic Dragon Syndrome?" - Public Service Announcement
:iconmonkeysundles:
SHERE AWESOMENESS!!!
You ask for critics, so I'm gonna try.
Critic's arn't all bad...right? *laugh*

Faces= Shere Awesomeness. The confused/hesitating look on Kirby briliantly contrasts the confused/disgusted look on DeX3's.

posisitions=Brilliance. the cloxe proximity makes it feel like DeX3 thinks he's a bit too close to whatever Kirby's gonna do with that watermellon. He's been a victome of Kirbie's sucking powers one too many times, so you almost think he's trying to get out of there just in case.

everything else=finominal. point blank finominal.


...*laugh* I'm not much of a critic if I can't find something to criteec can I.
Darn!
*laugh*

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:icondarkstalkerlati:
the Penguin King rises again!

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