The final round of Senior announcements for 2009!
Artist's Comments
Drawn in Tegaki J.
This took me way longer than necessary, but I'm very happy with the overall result. YES, I'M STILL DOING FANART. I can't get rid of this disgusting fangirlism I have inside me. Oh, and I'm going to actually request critques for the first time. I know there are some mistakes in here that I was too blind to see and I want to hear what you guys would say about it. 8D Thanks! Disclaimer: Characters (c) Nintendo Art (c) *BechnoKid Comments
I love it! You make Tegaki look so easy. XD
I'd love to critique this, and I'm honing my OCD senses, but I CAN'T FIND ANYTHING WRONG. Sorry... XDD -- Marxtosis(märks'tō'səs),n.: The process in which a crazy backstabbing jester splits itself in half, resulting in a black hole. CBP (sē' bē' pē ),v.: To make artwork that makes you swear you're on drugs. fgdsfgas Awww I love how you draw them, usually when people insist on drawing human forms of everything it irritates me but this is just lovable <3. I'D CRIT but there is very little wrong and I am too tired to think :C
-- "You there! Is that your giant under-floor rotating Return of the Jedi badge? Well stop it! Did you know that rotating images from space trilogies can cause sudden outbreaks of Puff the Magic Dragon Syndrome?" - Public Service Announcement fgdsfgas Awww I love how you draw them, usually when people insist on drawing human forms of everything it irritates me but this is just lovable <3. I'D CRIT but there is very little wrong and I am too tired to think :C
-- "You there! Is that your giant under-floor rotating Return of the Jedi badge? Well stop it! Did you know that rotating images from space trilogies can cause sudden outbreaks of Puff the Magic Dragon Syndrome?" - Public Service Announcement SHERE AWESOMENESS!!!
You ask for critics, so I'm gonna try. Critic's arn't all bad...right? *laugh* Faces= Shere Awesomeness. The confused/hesitating look on Kirby briliantly contrasts the confused/disgusted look on DeX3's. posisitions=Brilliance. the cloxe proximity makes it feel like DeX3 thinks he's a bit too close to whatever Kirby's gonna do with that watermellon. He's been a victome of Kirbie's sucking powers one too many times, so you almost think he's trying to get out of there just in case. everything else=finominal. point blank finominal. ...*laugh* I'm not much of a critic if I can't find something to criteec can I. Darn! *laugh* -- "IT BURNS LIKE FIRE!"My little sister when she scraped her elbow and grandma had to put antibacterial stuff on it.The bottle said in big red letters NO STING. Every time I try to talk it's "sorry this" and "forgive me that" and "I'm not worthy" -God |
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Next I would like to say that your designs for the gijinka versions of these characters are by far my favorites that I have seen online.
That being said, for the critique:
The only thing I can think of that jumps out at me when I look at this is that I wish the fur/ruff parts of DeeDeeDee's coat were outlined. Maybe not with black, but some sort of outlining.
I say this because the edges disappear towards the top-left of the neckline (that's our left, his right). I don't think there was quite enough contrast there and it looks a bit flat.
But then again, who's to say that outlining wouldn't do the same?
Anyways, again, great technique and good creativity with the designs, the layout/composition and the cleanliness of the lines using the given space and program.
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